Business Writing @ Purdue

OK, here are my first draft of the slides for my part of the presentation.

At this point in the project, we have a basic outline of out presentation, in storyboard form.  As we haven't really had that much opportunity to put much into the project, due to the late feedback from our client, that is just about all we have at this point.  Each member of the group contibuted to their individual protion of the project to the storyboard, as we now have 5 members, we broke the project up into 5 parts, with each member taking a part.  All of this was essentially done during the two class periods this week (Tuesday November 6, and Thursday November 8 at 1:30 PM).  By next

At this point, our group has, in effect, finished the white paper project. Due to the fact that class was cancelled on Tuesday (October 16), we chose to meet as a group at the normal class time (1:30 PM), rather than during the evening time we had decided on the previous Thursday. At that time, we reviewed the peer analyses received over the weekend on the project, and I condensed the information, reducing the content by approximately 600 words.

Hof, Robert.  “Facebook’s New Wrinkles.”  Businessweek.com.  August 20, 2007.  October 9, 2007. http://www.businessweek.com/magazine/content/07_34/b4047050.htm?chan=search.

For an almost blindingly obvious reason, I chose the veterinary medical symbol as my professional avatar, due primarily to the fact that in my professional career, I plan on being a veterinarian. Although it can be important to establish some sort of personal relationship with a client in most fields out there, the medical field differs greatly, in general. It isn’t always a good thing to be a warm and cheery face. It can be very difficult to receive news regarding an inoperable tumor from someone with a smile on their face.