I know these are not your final slides and your presentation looked good in class on Thursday. From what I remember you guys were adjusting your presentation because of Mona Lisa's Sword's status as a Non-profit. You guys are using YouTube now so it might be cool to put in a few embedded YouTube movies into your presentation to show Mona Lisa's Sword that they could do that with movies they create using YouTube. Anyways, it looked pretty good on Thursday so good luck with the rest of it.
As Ranan states, these are rough draft slides as of Tuesday, 11/13. He's done a lot to them since then, as evidenced by the in-class presentation on Thursday.
I assume that this is not nearly close to your final presentation. The slides are very plain and have no effort put into them. They need color, a background and most of all images of this program. I know that this is not the program that you chose to use and have had problems with what application you are using, but this is the only thing that I can find to comment on.
I found the presentation to be very plain and effort less. Only the subject matter aspect was covered and no aesthetic factors were given due importance. The subject was very technical and had a lot of aspects to be covered and the presentation missed them by a mile. The user interface and screen shots were missed a lot as its very important explaining a subject which most of the auidence have not knowledge about, even people with little understanding need some reference points which is main reason why we include screen shots in a presentation. The presentation need a lot of improvement and aspect involvement to be comprehensive.
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I know these are not your final slides and your presentation looked good in class on Thursday. From what I remember you guys were adjusting your presentation because of Mona Lisa's Sword's status as a Non-profit. You guys are using YouTube now so it might be cool to put in a few embedded YouTube movies into your presentation to show Mona Lisa's Sword that they could do that with movies they create using YouTube. Anyways, it looked pretty good on Thursday so good luck with the rest of it.
As Ranan states, these are
As Ranan states, these are rough draft slides as of Tuesday, 11/13. He's done a lot to them since then, as evidenced by the in-class presentation on Thursday.
needs alot
I assume that this is not nearly close to your final presentation. The slides are very plain and have no effort put into them. They need color, a background and most of all images of this program. I know that this is not the program that you chose to use and have had problems with what application you are using, but this is the only thing that I can find to comment on.
Very Plain
I found the presentation to be very plain and effort less. Only the subject matter aspect was covered and no aesthetic factors were given due importance. The subject was very technical and had a lot of aspects to be covered and the presentation missed them by a mile. The user interface and screen shots were missed a lot as its very important explaining a subject which most of the auidence have not knowledge about, even people with little understanding need some reference points which is main reason why we include screen shots in a presentation. The presentation need a lot of improvement and aspect involvement to be comprehensive.