This presentation looks good. I particularly like how every slide looks similar and the design is the same throughout. The background looks good with the font and you keep the text where you can see it and read it clearly. The only complaint that I have is that you could take some of the screenshots with a better computer and then use a better program to turn them into images. Some of the screenshots look like they were taken with the Macs in the computer lab and then resized poorly, they look like widescreen images resized in 3:4 format. This is a relatively easy fix that you could do in any ITAP lab.
Presentation looks good. I think it will get a very good grade and is one of the better presentations in the class. Concerning the screen shots- I don't think it is necessary to be able to read all of the screen shots. Some of the shots are put in the presentation just to be viewed and don't necessary have to be readable. With that being said, if there are any shot that people need to be able to read, then obviously they should be readable. Good luck in the rest of the class.
Color scheme and information are very good. The bullet points are short and to the point. However, I feel like your screen shots are way too small. You can barely see what the screen looks like and you cant really make out what the text says. For someone who has bad eyesight this might be a challenge for them to navigate.
I really like the color scheme (aside from the fact that occasionally some of the images are lost in the white part of the background) and the layout of the presentation. However, the one thing that umps out at me when I first look at the presentation is the fact that I can’t read a single word in the screenshots. I know that you wrote step by step descriptions and such on the slides as well, but perhaps you would want to crop some of the images a little so that they only show the relevant parts of the screen at each step. This could really help improve readability. Honestly, right now, it looks like those screenshots could be from just about any site.
First off I would like to thank you guys for being so attentive to our presentation and thank you for all your recommendations (I'm in the Video group). I really like your guy's presentation. I really liked the picture of the founder of Flickr in your presentation. The background is very sharpe and professional; which is a deadly good combination. If you could I think that making the picture a little bigger maybe help with the clarity of the picture (I stress maybe). I just feel that all around you guys might have the best presentation/ group dynamic. All in all you guys did a great job and best of luck with any editing you do!
I like your group slides and you guys really did a good job. The layout is pretty good as well as the background, the color, the font and font size are all good. The picutres and words content are in a balence (alomost 1:1 ratio and every slides have words and pictures). You guys introduce this application in a very detailed way, which is very easy to understand and follow for people like me (I'm retarded at computer. If I can follow and understand it, then I think everybody can do it! =p)
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This presentation looks good. I particularly like how every slide looks similar and the design is the same throughout. The background looks good with the font and you keep the text where you can see it and read it clearly. The only complaint that I have is that you could take some of the screenshots with a better computer and then use a better program to turn them into images. Some of the screenshots look like they were taken with the Macs in the computer lab and then resized poorly, they look like widescreen images resized in 3:4 format. This is a relatively easy fix that you could do in any ITAP lab.
Presentation looks good. I
Presentation looks good. I think it will get a very good grade and is one of the better presentations in the class. Concerning the screen shots- I don't think it is necessary to be able to read all of the screen shots. Some of the shots are put in the presentation just to be viewed and don't necessary have to be readable. With that being said, if there are any shot that people need to be able to read, then obviously they should be readable. Good luck in the rest of the class.
screenshots
Color scheme and information are very good. The bullet points are short and to the point. However, I feel like your screen shots are way too small. You can barely see what the screen looks like and you cant really make out what the text says. For someone who has bad eyesight this might be a challenge for them to navigate.
Good presentation, but you may want to rethink a few things...
I really like the color scheme (aside from the fact that occasionally some of the images are lost in the white part of the background) and the layout of the presentation. However, the one thing that umps out at me when I first look at the presentation is the fact that I can’t read a single word in the screenshots. I know that you wrote step by step descriptions and such on the slides as well, but perhaps you would want to crop some of the images a little so that they only show the relevant parts of the screen at each step. This could really help improve readability. Honestly, right now, it looks like those screenshots could be from just about any site.
Thank You
First off I would like to thank you guys for being so attentive to our presentation and thank you for all your recommendations (I'm in the Video group). I really like your guy's presentation. I really liked the picture of the founder of Flickr in your presentation. The background is very sharpe and professional; which is a deadly good combination. If you could I think that making the picture a little bigger maybe help with the clarity of the picture (I stress maybe). I just feel that all around you guys might have the best presentation/ group dynamic. All in all you guys did a great job and best of luck with any editing you do!
Great slides.
I like your group slides and you guys really did a good job. The layout is pretty good as well as the background, the color, the font and font size are all good. The picutres and words content are in a balence (alomost 1:1 ratio and every slides have words and pictures). You guys introduce this application in a very detailed way, which is very easy to understand and follow for people like me (I'm retarded at computer. If I can follow and understand it, then I think everybody can do it! =p)
Great slides! Good job!